Thursday, October 23, 2014

My blood story



On a cold and dark day a little girl named Kelly  and her mother were going shopping.It was around 7:00 when all of a sudden a burst of coldness filled the air.The shopkeeper went to get some blankets because he wanted to make sure that the customers would still go to his shop.

While he was getting the blankets Kelly and her mother  were listening to the soothing whale moans on the radio.As you  see Kelly and her mother are not those people that listen to music because they believe that they will burn  your ears from the loudness.

They waited for a long time for the shopkeeper to come back so Kelly and her mum decided to go around the counter and in the back room.There were stacks of boxes in the way so Amanda Kelly's mum pushed the boxes out of the way.

The  shopkeeper was lying down on his beanbag with the blankets on him so Amanda took the blanket off him and said it that you are not a really good owner keeping yourself warm instead of the customers. so she yanked the blanket off,  but when she took the blanket .

There was blood was splattered everywhere.She told Kelly not to look but she just couldn't help herself. Amanda yanked Kelly's arm and pulled her back around the counter.

Amanda  went  to open the doors but they were locked. It got even colder than it was before,it was so cold that the air was turning to white.Kelly thought it was not possible cause  a]Amanda would never let her in cold rooms.Amanda  tried to think about how to stay warm but nothing came up.She kept thinking and thinking until a dark figure came towards her and Kelly. Then again lying there side by side is Amanda and Kelly.Dead on the floor but the thing is no one knew who killed them.People say it was the shopkeeper that killed them other people say there ghost still haunts the market which I believe but No one knew what happened but me.





Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Bar vs line graph we had to place the set of data into a group of bar graphs and line graphs too.

Temperatures in March
Room 10’s favorite color
What fruit do we have in our lunch box?
The height of a bean plant over 2 months
Lemonade sales over a week.
Depth of a bath
How children come to school
How long you can hold your breath for
How I felt over yachting week.
Most common number rolled on a dice.


Bar Graph
Line Graph
Room 10’s favorite color
What fruit do we have in our lunch box?
Lemonade sales over a week
How children come to school
Most common number rolled on a dice.
























Temperatures in March
The height of a bean plant over 2 months
Depth of a bath
How long you can hold your breath for
How I felt over yachting week.




Thursday, September 25, 2014

Rating my optimist yachting days




























This is my graph for optimist yachting.I was rating it out of 20.

The disco





The booming sound of the music, was hurting my ears.It was to loud for me so I tried to find a spot that was not to loud but I was trapped.Speakers were in every corner so I couldn't escape. I blocked my ears cause it hurt ed so much and then people started to look at me funny.It was like they have seen August in the  book wonder  for the first time.I wasn’t to keen on people staring at me that way, so I made an ecscuse for people not to see me like that.I pretended to go toilet so then they couldn't stare at me.When I got there my ears stopped thumping so I went and took a deep breathe and then disapered into the crowd.


It took me a minute for me to get use to the music  and the people stomping around and dancing like crazy.I still hated it to even make it worse someone yelled out dance party time or something like that.So everyone got  in a circle and waited for the first dancer to come up.The first dancer was pretty good but I thought the second dancer was even better.It was break dancer vs girl break dancer and guess what! they both won. After that had finished their were only a few songs left.good thing bob the builder wasn’t one of them.

Finally a song that came up that I knew and it was a song from my production.  The song was  called Aotearoa.I started to dance so did some other people I started to twirl but that made me feel sick so I sat on the chairs.I watched the people dance and dance then the final song came on.My dad was waiting at the end of the hall so I just decided to leave early.So I got all my lollies and toys and headed out the door and Bang I wondered why he said that…..

My Movie For Wonder


Tuesday, September 16, 2014

My 200 word story

writing.jpg     Hi my name is Jack and this is the story  of how I became frozen in time.  It was 1965 and I was painting my first picture  .I decided to paint  a girl I don’t know why it was just random.  The girl  had beautiful details added on her.  She started looking more realistic each time I added a detail.  She had long auburn hair and  her skin was white as snow and her blue eyes that looked like the sky.  After I couldn't make any more details onto her. It was like she woke up from the picture and  then  came alive.  She grabbed my arm and yanked on my t-shirt.

She had a angry look on her face she looked like she was going to blow.  I knew then it was time to leave my wonderful world and join the artistic life.  So she pulled me in I was stuck in the painting I made.  Years went by and I was still trapped. I wondered if I will ever see my family again? Time by time my birthday past and  my parents would come and stress out because they never found me .the police were with them they tried to find any trace of where I went all that was found was a painting of a girl and me.